100wc week 9 3/12/18

goal: to use similes

link to prompt: https://100wc.net/

prompt:   … but they were exhausted…

Had … to …keep going. But they were exhausted. They knew that they would not last much longer. As members of the group collapsed one by one dropping like flies. The standing ones getting weaker and weaker. Running through the mazes of doors and archways. Not once had they stopped running they had been running for 5 days straight with no sleep, limited food and water. As they got closer to their destination, the group grew smaller and smaller. They were desperate to reach their goal to save their towns and village. Must …. Keep …. Going they all panted.

One Reply to “100wc week 9 3/12/18”

  1. Hi Charlotte,

    I think this is really good because it reminds me of Maze Runner, but with a little bit of a twist. I liked the fact that it was to try and save the towns and villages. The simile, ‘dropping like flies’ was intriguing and well done for including it (as it was your goal).
    I liked how you left me with an unanswered question at the end.
    This is great writing.
    I hope you have a lovely day.

    From Brookes, Halls Creek

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